My Cute Integrated Writing (my feeling)

 

 Today I have an exam for the TOEFL IBT integrated writing. After I got some meeting in the class and also some exersise before. Actually I feel scary to doing the exam today. Why ? Because the note taking is 40% reading and 60 % for listening. Yah, it's all about listening , I'm not good but I'm learning. So, when the started I prepare my self to be ready with the test. I do the note taking from a reading , I got 3 points. Then when the time is up I wrote a summerize from the lecture in the listening.



Out of the box, it's not scary like I though before. It's more fun and more easy than the independent writing. I don't way ? But I'm feeling relax during doing the integrated writing today. I used some sy nonym and make a transition phrases also I make Stuctural change when I make an essays from the reading and listening.

Tralala... the bell was rang , and I stoped my writing with the conclusion. It's quite good enough for me as a beginner to having this exam , even though just a Quiz in the school but I hope I can do the real test for TOEFL IBT integrated and independen writing. It fun and I love to learn english more. :) :) :p

My long last Friend

“Here together, friends forever. Some things were just meant to be, and that's you and me”
- Winnie The Pooh-
In my opinion, “Friend” is really important for me. I can live without laptop and handphone but I can’t live without ”friend” the person who is sharing my mood with me whenever I’m happy or sad and  I found “her” my really best friend who has nice appearance , good personality and I’m very happy that I can be friend with her. 

 My best friend is Dika. She’s cute, good looking and not talk too much with the person that she isn’t known very well. When you see her first time you might think she’s hard to get along with but actually if you understand she well you will know that it isn’t like what you see. She has a good smile, big eyes and pretty long hair that will let people want to be friend with her when they see her.
             


 this picture was taken when we go to Bali Island :)

 In addition, Dika is a responsible person. She always takes care of her jobs well and finishes the work on time. She’s hard working and organized. She can manage the time very well and everything is in her schedule. Moreover, she’s reliable sometime I’ll talk to her some secrets and she can keep the secret very well and won’t talk to others. I think she is a really nice friend.
               


What is more, Dika is a really good friend for me. She’s the person who understands me well. She’s always beside me when I’m upset, listen to me and help me every time when I need help. When i have problem she will give me some advices and help me to solve the problem. Even when I don’t understand in the lesson she explained patiently for me to understand every time. I think I’m really lucky that I have met Dika and I’m very happy we are friend and I think we will be friend forever.

My mom, My best Friend

“Who is your best friend?” no doubt, my answer for this question is my mom. She is so considerate and generous that I admire her and realize her as my best friend. She taught me how to be a nice person since I was a little girl. She comforted me and helped me solve problems as I was in trouble. She encouraged me when I hesitated. So that she is my first teacher who taught me a lot of things and also my best friend who supports me all the time.

My mom is my first teacher who taught me a lof of things. She taught me the first word as I was learning how to speak. She told me fairy tales and significant stories which helped me know more and better about this world. She taught me to be a generous and kind person but not selfish. She taught me what I should do and what I shouldn’t. Even when I was naughty and made many troubles, she would just point my faults patiently.

I realize my mom as my best friend. She solves my troubles with me and guides me to brightness. She comfortes me as I am sad for having quarrel with others. She is always patient to listen to me and then tell me what I did wrong. Not only that, she also supports me and encourages me so that I won’t give in easily.

I admire my mom, she taught me a lot as a teacher, she supports me as my best friend. She not only takes care of her family very well but also is a successful business woman. I’m so pround to have her as my mom. I admire her and respect her and also appreciate for what she did for me. I love my mom forever! 

 

Life Revolution

Revolution on my life
Many changes that I expected
In the life of the affected globalization
Many changes that I've done
 would remain as good as this
And as perfect as I expected 
In solitude without love and affection

You may not understand it 
About my bitter life experience 
As bitter as you accept the fact 
That you may not receive
In the heat of the scorching sun 
I remove the sweat and passion 
Towards a change
That called revolution on my life

Would I continue to survive in this revolution?
I always pray and seek
And I believe God will protect me
In undergoing this revolution
although it is very difficult for me

My Life Change

When I was in the 10 grader last year, I really feel so mad. Why? Because alot of homework that I have got and sometimes I still confuse about the lesson that teacher give to me. All of teacher use english in their lessons and actually I'm not good in english. That's way I have many problem to understand it. Generally, I do an action to do the exercise without any planing in my mind then I got a very bad score. I know , what I do is wrong but I always make the same. So I feel very fool person that never know about all of the thing in the world. Someday, I read a quotation that make me change my mind.

That written “If you think success you will be success, but if you think lose you will be a loser forever” it's so wonderfull for me. After that, I tried to evaluation my self about all of the thing was make me become a lazy person. Then, the answer is I am too delay my home work, never serious when the teacher teached me in the class, and always played game after school the last is chatting on facebook. Next, I made a reflaction to me, my self. So I know which one of my action or my paradigm that wrong nd must be replace.

As soon as possible I make a revision on my life,I make a good management time then I also minimalize to chatt on internet also played game after school. I wrote all of my target for a day , a week, and a month. I prepared a good plan for my future life and now I feel better. My life is so colourfull although there is a lot of homework from the teacher. I growing up, I do my action by my planing and I think it better for me to make a plan first than do an action. So now, I always think first to make a decision what is the benefit and what is the harm for me.

 

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